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There's nothing in the world that could replace that look
Nothing that could ever change me the way she once did
At one moment I felt great, but the next blink meant fate
Did no good to the feelings of joy and hope, I guess I'm too late

There's nothing in the world that could replace the pain
Of the dreams and hopes that've gone away      
What was I? Insane?
Beautiful dreams that once upon a time made me laugh
Dreams that make me cry, make me wonder why

I'd like
Everything in the world to replace what is going on inside
It seems a fight like I've never felt before, out of sight
The time has come to start denying, to start relying
On friends and a life without her, she'll one day be a blur

Don't try and squeeze my heart in two
Don't try 'cause it'll break if you do
Don't touch my soul 'cause it won't be a whole
Anymore
I'm just looking for a door

I can see your eyes
Once they would've made me smile
All I want to do is forget
I know that I won't regret
How I never showed you what I meant
I know you won't regret

I regret everything I've done
Should've gone for it at the start
Should've known I'd end up this way
She'll be happy though
That's one thing I know
I guess
But my heart is cramping together
It might not survive the night but wathever
We'll finally meet in heaven
Anyway
©2007-2009 ~daffaloo
:icondaffaloo:

Author's Comments

You don't need to say this is bad, nor do you have to say it's good. This is just my thoughts and feelings, not really poetic and without a system. I like the title better than the thing itself. All I can say, I had to peek away two teers while writing this. I hope that says enough. I don't cry much

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:iconshelagnoa:
Depressing. :( :bulletblue:

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:icondaffaloo:
I hope it's the start of the end of it ;)

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I've been chased by a rain cloud
I was lost and nearly drowned and kicked around
But now I'm found and I won't run away
:iconshelagnoa:
:nod: :) :bulletblue:

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:iconbonitarobinita:
i think its pretty darn awesome.. kinda reminds me of what could be.. has the potential to be.. a kelly clarkson/maroon five/jackson waters song..

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I am Sleeping Beauty... and Sleeping Beauty I shall remain
Until the world choses to accept me... until I feel whole again
:icondaffaloo:
thanks a lot. to be honest, I myself don't like those artists. too pop. but thanks for the well-meant compliment!

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I've been chased by a rain cloud
I was lost and nearly drowned and kicked around
But now I'm found and I won't run away

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November 29, 2007
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